Sunday, February 24, 2008

Aggie Jazz (draft)

Aggie Jazz


FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE
Feb. 25, 20008

Jon Gudmundson, Director of Jazz Studies
4015 Old Main Hill
Logan, Utah 84322

Make it Swing


LOGAN, Utah -- Make any reception, party, or get together swing with the sizzling smooth sounds of jazz from the students of Utah State University Jazz Studies.

Now for hire, two students small jazz groups can bring life to any social gathering. The Caine, and USU jazz combos are two of the most versatile and readily available groups on campus. Under the direction of Jon Gudmundson, director of jazz studies, and Lars Yorgasen, guest instructor, these two bands can bring any party to life with many of the classics known by jazz lovers.
Most commonly known as combos, these small groups consist of about five to six instruments: drums, piano, bass, guitar and a horn, like a saxophone, trumpet or trombone. Since a jazz combo is so small they can fit in just about in any local where people gather.
"Jazz is a great way to lighten the mood of and add a classy feeling to any party," said Jon Gudmundson, director of jazz studies. "These students put a lot of effort and practice into their combos to sound professional."
Hiring one of these college combos is an affordable way to add music and class which makes any reception, party or get together memorable. For more information about pricing and availibilty please contact Dallin Koecher.
Dallin Koecher
Band Member and Media Contact

2 comments:

Madison Hintze said...

Dallin, I think you did a great job and this was an excellent idea. Overall it was good, a few wording errors that might make it sound a bit more professional, but nothing serious. it sounds great!

Preston said...

Proof-read for spelling errors.

Your headline could be more clear regarding the actual topic of your release.

Include the most important information in your lead ... the first two paragraphs.

I had trouble picking out your boilerplate. it could be more put together into one paragraph.